Video of a Novel: Revision 2b

Here's what I'm thinking about my rough draft of Chapter Two

If you didn’t get a chance, head back over to the previous post and read the rough draft of Chapter Two. In it, I introduce the main protagonist of the story (The Old Woman), who will remain unnamed throughout the story, mostly because she’s based on a popular character and I suppose it would be a copyright issue if I told you who it is. Still not sure exactly how to move forward with that (and if you have any guesses about who she is, let me know…it will become more apparent as the story progresses…)

Anywho, here we are. What do I like about this chapter, and what do I want to improve in it?