Video of a Novel: Revision 2a
The protagonist enters the scene...
Another week. Here we go. I was camping over the weekend with a few friends, and it was the perfect summer weekend for it, but since I’m getting older, my allergies act up when I sleep outside and sit beside a smoky campfire. Anyway, it was wonderful, but I’m glad to be home.
This week’s chapter, Chapter Two, introduces the Old Woman who is also the protagonist of the story. I won’t say too much more, except to mention that one of the main things I need to revise here is the timeline—more on that in tomorrow’s list of revisions.
I hope you enjoy it. Tomorrow I’ll share my full list of what I want to accomplish in this chapter and what needs to be revised.