Really enjoyed this! The ending was so surprising. Definitely didn't see that coming. You gave great hints toward it, though, and now I want to go back and re-read it. The blue eyes. The way his roommate opened his package and was shocked that he had that money. So great! Thought the dialogue was really nice, too. Thank you for sharing it!
It has a 1984-but-2023 feel to it, and the ending was a surprise! What’s really creepy is that I used the “audio” feature to read this to me while I puttered around the house. It was eerily as though Hannah was reading it to me 😂
Really enjoyed this! The ending was so surprising. Definitely didn't see that coming. You gave great hints toward it, though, and now I want to go back and re-read it. The blue eyes. The way his roommate opened his package and was shocked that he had that money. So great! Thought the dialogue was really nice, too. Thank you for sharing it!
Thanks for reading, Mary. Really appreciate it!
It has a 1984-but-2023 feel to it, and the ending was a surprise! What’s really creepy is that I used the “audio” feature to read this to me while I puttered around the house. It was eerily as though Hannah was reading it to me 😂
Thanks, Tresta! And I love that image of Hannah doing the reading! :)
This was so fun to read! Didn't see the end coming AT ALL! What a great twist.
One hint - the HR lady. The way she referred to him at one point...
Thank you for sharing this.
Thanks for taking the time to read it, Aaron!
Wow. Not expecting that ending!