When a Chapter Just Feels Off

Revision 5b

This is a tough part of the story. I’ve introduced the three main characters (The Old Woman, Lloyd, and Alan), and now it’s time to start introducing some tension, some questions, and increase the stakes, even if subtly.

• Make some adjustments to the plot lines up with some of the new things I’ve introduced in the second draft (the sketches, etc.).

• I’d lik…