Video of a Novel: Revision 3b

What I'd like to do with this chapter...

If you read my last post, you are up-to-date through chapter two of my work-in-progress. You met Alan the gardener in chapter one and then The Old Woman in chapter two. My primary goal in chapter three is to introduce you to the third and final main character, Lloyd Ketterley.

But one thing I realized while I wrote the first draft was that Lloyd did not…