Video of a Novel: Revision 1b

Here's what I want to revise in Chapter 1

So, revision is a hairy beast, because you don’t want to lose any of the good stuff, but often our rough drafts need a lot of work. First, let me identify the things I like about the first chapter (which you can read HERE), and then I’ll get into the things I want to change.

A few of the main things I liked about Chapter 1 (and, by the way, Chapter 1 was…