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JL Gerhardt's avatar

I suppose some people find help and meaning and roots in long paragraphs about ideas, but for me, there is nothing like a tidy story about a little thing to unzip the whole world. Thank you for this.

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David Todd McCarty's avatar

This makes me think of the Paul Hostovsky poem “Coconut.”

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Shawn Smucker's avatar

Thanks, David. I'll have to check it out.

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David Todd McCarty's avatar

Bear with me I

want to tell you

something about

happiness

it’s hard to get at

but the thing is

I wasn’t looking

I was looking

somewhere else

when my son found it

in the fruit section

and came running

holding it out

in his small hands

asking me what

it was and could we

keep it it only

cost 99 cents

hairy and brown

hard as a rock

and something swishing

around inside

and what on earth

and where on earth

and this was happiness

this little ball

of interest beating

inside his chest

this interestedness

beaming out

from his face pleading

happiness

and because I wasn’t

happy I said

to put it back

because I didn’t want it

because we didn’t need it

and because he was happy

he started to cry

right there in aisle

five so when we

got it home we

put it in the middle

of the kitchen table

and sat on either

side of it and began

to consider how

to get inside of it

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Shawn Smucker's avatar

I love that.

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David Todd McCarty's avatar

It’s been interesting watching these kids grow up and you fall apart, from afar. :)

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David Todd McCarty's avatar

It’s probably my favorite poem. I wrote a piece that included it, along with a story of my own stepson but I can’t find it. Don’t remember where I put it. Probably Facebook unfortunately.

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